A powerful witch uses her prisoner and turns her into a hideous beast for her own sick pleasure. My first attempt at muscle growth, so bear with me here.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.83
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.83
- Technical: 3.67
tdean
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
great story. please keep going.
anony123
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
aside from some very minor technical problems an amazingly good story hope you decide to continue
Roid Abuser
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Bit dark, and, well lizards (or whatever, hulking she-male demon things) aren't exactly sexy.
But, if you're into that sort of thing, this is a good story.
Darkheart
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
This was a very enjoyable story and I really hope you continue on with the Witch's plans. My only quibble is that you might want to proofread a bit more, or have someone proofread for you.
Otherwise, keep up the good work.
Dolph the Dolphin
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
finally, at long last, a story worth reading. If this is your first story, then I would very much like to see what you can manage in the future. Than you.
JT
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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