Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.83
- BE: 3.17
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 3.92
Klondike
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Tip top stuff. I'll eexpct more now.
Professor Grow
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
It's a nice start to the story, but it's really not much more than an introduction. The story codes were very misleading as most of them don't actually happen in this story.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I liked this start of a story. Yes, "start." It holds great promise.
I am curious why the probe stung the man twice, and her once. Perhaps it is confused by the "Y" chromosome and thus gave him a double dose? (And so he'll be hit one more time?)
And, of course, need much, much more breat expansion.
stephenie
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Over all I love the story line and can't wait to se the future of this story.
Xero
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Keep it going. I'm liking the story so far.
yep!
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
More!! Please! it's Awesome!
anon91
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You can manually alter the url to download files to download this file, the id of this story is 2500 so you'll need to enter this into your adress bar: www.overflowingbra.com/download.php?StoryID=2500
Baconman
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
HEY JUST IN CASE YOU DIDN'T QUITE GET THE DRIPPING SARCASM, YOU FUCKED UP
anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
This story (and I have read it) has the same problem as everything else you've uploaded here: it ends like you got bored.
Apple
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
*note I have read this story, Its called The Island of Clones* (Hope Mr HHH fixes the link and perhaps prevents people from uploading while leaving the title blank)
The Story is kinda short. Its obvious that this is the first part and just introducing the characters and setting. Its not bad but I wouldn't have put all those story codes in there for this story. You may have planned to have those in the future of this story, but its best to label each part with only what is actually in each story.
SilentReader
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Words cannot describe this story. I mean the plot itself was awe-inspiring, especially the chapter arc where the main characters visit the Moon and literally fuck the Moon. My favourite scene was the pie eating contest, (no on will ever know where all the hairpins went).
Its quite amazing how you managed to relate the protagonists past to that of Kesley Grammer and how her character development is a metaphor for World War 2.
I can't imaging what you will write next. Hopefully it will be as [ADJECTIVE REDACTED] as this story.
Alex
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
this story is amazing! ive never seen anything like it my good sir, please keep writing more of these!!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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