Part 2: Combined Effect. Michelle, Rose, Kimiko and Maaya begin to see the results of the genetic restructuring formulas, and it seems they’re getting more than they bargained for.
The download also includes part 1.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.67
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Likable characters, good dialog, and good premise.
brit
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Love it. LOVE IT. NEED MORE! I absolutely love all of the height growth. Fantastic. Must have more!
Clownboat
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story! Looking forward to part 3. One thing though, it says that the population exploded due to long lifespans and the elimination of STDs. So people don't worry about safe sex. There are already lots of different forms of contraception besides birth control pills, such as IUDs. You'd think that in the future there would be even more of an advance in contraception. But anyhow, I nitpick.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
can't wait for the next part!
Silussa
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Solid and realistic future story with very real characters, high quality writing...and breast enlargement and growth. :)
Ggjj
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Amazing work. The characters are believable, as is the growth. Enjoyed the guilt from the illicit sex, as that is real.
While I know the name of the site is "overflowing bra," don't neglect the growing boy.
dfd
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
cant wait for chapter 3, hopefully you wil focus on the characters adjusting to their changes and not just have them immediately love love them.
adell
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
best story ive read so far
deus777
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Well written. The first part feels more like a sci-fi story rather than a BE story, but the second chapter is much better in that regard. Please keep writing!
Jandrys
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked both parts of the story so far. Great job developing the characters (in both respects) and the plot. You are doing an excellent job crafting this story and I can't wait to see where you take it. Most of the time I can easily predict exactly what is going to happen in a story, but you have done a good job at surprising me and adding a good amount of depth to the story and the characters. It was nice seeing things from Maaya's perspective instead of just Mike's. I hope you continue to show us things from the other character's persectives (especially Rose with her 'new higher' perspective!). As someone else noted, this would be a good story even without the BE! Thank you for writing it and keep up the good work!
maguffle
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I just finished reading part one and two and all I can say is great work. You've created a captivating world with believable, likeable characters. This story didn't need BE to be good and that (in my opinion) is the highest praise for a BE story. Keep up the good work!
RandomHero
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The quality of your writing really stands out. Natural feeling characters, story progression, and stage. Speech and interactions don't feel forced. Easy to read, good flow, no grammar/spelling/punctation distractions!
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I've been waiting for this since I read the first part, and this did not disappoint in the least. This one of the slim amount of BE stories I've read that have good character development, grammar, and was, well, a STORY. Keep it up.
Gojira
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I am impressed. Future-esque but not too spacey, with realistic responses from the very likeable characters. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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