James discovers he is practically immortal and decides to become a super hero. The only problem is there is no need for one, so he decides to create a super villain femme fatale so he can acheive his dream.
Part 1 is a bit light on sexual action I am afraid, a lot of setting the scene, but a little taster at the end of whats still left to come. Apologies for any errors, Anglicised spelling is intentional.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 2.50
- Technical: 4.50
oxriff
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
love the premise, but you switched from Holly to Nicola out of nowhere. sequel please!
a
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
loved the story and can't wait for the next installment!
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