The Overflowing Bra

This is a great story. Like other people have already said, with an extra bit of editing to fix the typos, grammer and occasional plot lurch this would be a great start to an interesting series. I felt that sometimes you struggled to get your ideas down on paper. Please keep going and give us more.

I really, really, like this story.  It needs another round of editing, (typos, broken sentences, weird person changes, at various points), but by and large it's an excellent story with really good characters.  I really enjoyed it and really hope to see more of the story.

I liked the story itself, it was quite well-done, but certainly not a wankable piece. Which isn't really a negative thing, if you think about it, but I'm sure that's what people look for on this site. I like the negativity linked with the "brainwashing" and "bimbofying" as well; really not a fan of stories that turn women into drooling retards and call it a good thing.

I just couldn't get through the whole story.  Sections of the text seemed to be missing; sentences would end mid-way, and it seemed that I had missed significant events.  Also, after several chapters, no BE or anything else better than a quick boob-flash.  I've enjoyed your other work, but I'm not sure what the other posters were reading.

Though not your best, it is quite enjoyable. For me, the "master pc rumour mill" saga was most entertaining. With this one, there is less progression and multiple transformations to enjoy. As always, you technical quality is excellent, and it stands out above the crowd on this site. Your writings are one of the few reasons why I still regularly check up on overflowing. Personally, though, it thought the ending was too abrupt and that the transformations could have benefited from more descriptive language, but the overall piece was quite interesting. 
Thank you for writing.

Imaginative, interesting, and well crafted. Ended too soon! Really. I mean it. But a fine piece as always WP. Big THANK YOU.