This is the next 4 chapters of Alien Research. Phil explores more possibilities with body modification, lactation, pregnancy, and fun with horny Amazons. Danni joins the family. Phil lets the girls in on his secret abilities. There is some unbirthing and Phil punishes Danni's father for molesting her. It's a little violent but he deserves it. If you'd rather skip the violence just skip chapter eleven. The girls get to make some changes to themselves in chapter 12 and the fun really starts.
Please feel free to send feedback to raoulduke1963@yahoo.com. This is my first piece of erotic fiction so I need all the criticism I can get.
Thanks
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.60
Vampirate
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
No comment needed... just more story!
lisa
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Chaos Master
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
MORE PLEASE! Some of my favorite stories always have a hero/heroine with almost God-like powers tempered by a heart of gold. I do NOT however expect the main character to be perfect in every way, otherwise he/she would not have any depth. Raoulduke accomplishes this very well in Phillip, for example : his revenge on Danni's dad/rapist and allowing himself to be impaired through booze when he could just as easily prevented it shows he is just as capable of making odd/illogical choices as the rest of humanity. I CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE!!! PS only reason I did not give you a 5 in "technical quality" is because I personally kind of stink at it. :( So I cannot judge others because I do not what other people would say was "good" or "bad" .
TW
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Good story. The BE description is a bit brief and there isn't much actual BE happening, but your overall writing is quite good.
s-legacy86
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Keep it up best series I've read in a long time
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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