Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.31
- BE: 1.31
- Characters: 1.38
- Technical: 1.31
Anon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
What is this I don't even...
Malkizid
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
No, really, this was just misery.
The spelling looked like something out of babelfish, the story was non-existent and my spontaneous reaction on it was "WTF?"
This was not good, not good at all, not even mediocre.
SilentReader
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Oh God, I was crying I was laughing so hard. This reminded me of "Half-Life: Full Life Consequences."
The idea was there. Probably could have gotten a 3 rating if it was written better and in actual comprehensible English.
anonononon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I never posted a story because I didn't think I could write a good one.
That didn't stop this guy.
YIKES!
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Really, what's with all these horrendous stories? We must be the victims of some sort of terrorist cell.
craig
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
so hot to fap two plz make moer
Organon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Sad Face
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Is it really possible to troll a story archive?
Anonymous
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I wonder if it has something to do with the region of the world that uses WPS files? Most of them seem to be sub-standard writing.
WAKE UP!!!
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Well, if your native language is English, then i feel very sorry for you. Because then you obviously have a learning disorder.
If your native language isn't English, then i still feel very sory for you. This is plain horrible. The gramar is none existing, the BE is pathetic! Details in this story is nearly none existing. And Quite frankly the whole thing was a blatant insult to the readers. I implore you, never ever try to write a story again.
Because this was just painful.
Me
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I'm gonna stop you right now... first don't make it look like it's going to suck with a title and mini-about that a 5 year old came up with
Animal
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
too many problems to name
Anon
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
Not very good...really not that good.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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