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The Overflowing Bra

Vickys Struggle Finale
Vicky is torn between her need to fulfill her term as Wills sex slave or to escape.  But does she really want to?

Lots of: Sex, Anal, Bondage, Domination, Toys
No: Scat, Pain

Its a FAPping story, plain and simple.  Its my first one so please leave comments.  If I get positive feedback I might write more.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Awesome. Longer would be great.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Loved it, loved it, loved it. Would LOVE to see more from you.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

enjoyed this quite a bit. The explication at the beginning didn't add anything for me. I skipped it and went back to see what was there and it really wasn't necessary. The story itself gives us all the information we need, which was great. (It was easy to avoid reading the background, so if others enjoy it I see no reason not to include it in future stories.)

I liked the characters, and the way they interacted. The only thing I'd suggest is that you work on clarifying some of the physical descriptions, as it was hard to figure out where the characters were in relation to the other, what the room was like, etc.

Hope to see some more from you!!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Not bad! I love how you provided enough of a backstory for the reader before going straight to the finale.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It just does it for me, Bravo! Keep writing.

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3

I really like the premise here... but then i do enjoy a good RP where i am tricked of forced into growing... Enjoyed this much!

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