The Overflowing Bra

Loved the story, very good, and honestly I think people need to lay off, you don't have to jump straight into BE, this story has great build up that brings me back for more. Keep up the amazing work.

I wish I had your skill,I would have filled her up so much, her belly would be the only body part touching the floor. I guess I have a darker side, then you.

This story feels nostalgic to me. The beginning reminds me of Deux Ex Machina by whiffle40. While there was absolutely no BE in these first 4 chapters I have a feeling that you are saving it for the bedroom encounter with Cindy. 
You shouldn't make a habit of posting stories without and BE in them. The site has its title for a reason. Not to mention the mandatory tags for each story.

To BB47: Technically, there is offstage dream-state BE, but I agree that there should be much more considering the website he posted it on.
To author: The writing style is good. You've set up the stage for some interesting fantasies being played out. You just should have posted more of the first 32 chapters, so that we would have more BE.

So yes, there is no breast expansion. But after the swath of shitty stories coming in these last few months this is truly a gem regardless. Keep in mind everyone this is meant to be continued although I strongly urge the author to include breast expansion in the next installment as it was a grievous error to leave it out in this one. 
What I don't want is the author to feel disheartened by other reviews because regardless of cliche plot line it was executed so well that it was as if it was all original. I have not seen writing I enjoy more on this site period. The PACING is the true genius of his style, the author has great self control and doesn't allow things to escalate too quickly while still managing to fill the story with action.
Please continue! We are fortunate to have you writing here! Just remember that fat expansion is not the same as breast expansion:)

No breast expansion.  None.  This is a total PE story.  Pop quiz, the name of this archive is "the overflowing......".  Exactly.  Other than that, not too bad.  It's basically a story about a dude who's been under alien observation his whole life, when he gets older, they make contact and explain that he can have whatever wishes that he can come up with.. unlimited (yawn).  They use nanites and other technology to make his dick grow, change some random women and neighbors into cum obsessed sluts and instantly make food appear when he wants it, yada yada.  The whole time, he's in constant mental contact with the alien supervisor who is also horny for him and they flirt like crazy.  The story comes to an abrupt end almost in the middle of a sentence.