The Overflowing Bra

I don't know if there is any kind of faux pas about rating your own story, but I did want to respond to some of the words said here.  Thank all of you that responded, be it good or bad.
@Alstar: I kinda wanted to keep the main character as "sock puppet" as possible.  As you said, this is a standard (well I hope a little more than standard) wish fulfillment story. The main character is meant to be an old pair of pants the reader can slip into, which is why, while all of the other characters have heights and skin tone and hair&eye color, he did not. I will most likely not be flushing out his story, however, your comment made me want to put a kind of "anthologies" together with more details on the background of the aliens and the male protagonist, but it would be separate from the story.  
@ANYONE: I would really like if anyone was interested in (and had time to) proof read these two versions, and maybe the yet to be written 3rd one. I could than add the above mentioned "anthologies" and upload all 4 in PDF as some kinda... something.

Not your typical BE fare, but intriguing never the less.  Your focus on a male protagonist and the dark elements of the story is a refreshing break from standard fare.  The principal idea of an all powerful race of being that lack ambition selecting a random human male to learn about ambition is a great twist on the basic wish fulfillment story.
Basically, you have to enjoy a story were the main character is transformed into a godlike being.  I think most people are turn off by this, but if it is your thing, your story is a delight.
Again, the story idea and premise is well thought out and makes for a novel and exciting universe.  As far as, your grammar and spelling, I read the revised chapters and found them passable.  Keep in mind that people who are turned off by the dark subject matter are more likely to be critical of spelling, while other who enjoy it will look over minor writing errors.
I give you credit on the descriptions and motivations of the aliens.  I find them fascinating, but the protagonist could be more developed.  I would recommend flushing out his motive to be a dominant god of sex, other than the alien's want to understand sex and ambition, and the simple appeal of having a harem of alien sex slaves.
Lastly, the description of the BE, transformations, and sex could be more descriptive.  I won't mind more details into the minds of the aliens and protagonist experiencing changes and the experience of sex in theses fantastic bodies. 
Finally, I strongly hope you continue with the story.  Thank you for writing. 
    
  

Sorry for the harsh rating, but you used so many words that "sound" like other words but have a totally different meaning that I found myself having to reread sentences to make sense of them. I gather that English is not your native language, and I hate to be cruel, but perhaps, perchance, with this post i can recommend you write on, but consider letting someone proofread your work. 
The theme was somewhat original, if clumsily handled, yet the universe you created has promise. It does, however, certainly need work.
Keep on writing.

Couldn't get past the first few paragraphs. Too many errors and the story seemed so artificial. Try again.

Please continue to write more to this story. Very well done, especially for a first time. I would suggest you make a larger, further reaching plot so we can enjoy this universe for a good long while to come. PLEASE keep writing!