fantomeinfernal@yahoo.com
This is the kind of flu everyone would like to catch...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.44
- BE: 3.89
- Characters: 4.22
- Technical: 4.00
Xero
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Would not mind catching that flu!
tstar
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
i felt like i've already read this story.it was more about penis expansion than anything.there should have been more about the wife's b.e. and growth.that would have made it sexier.too many writing errors,is englsh your primary language?
what
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story! Maybe we can see a prequel/sequel from you in regards to the original woman that gave the "flu" to the guy in this story. Hope to see more of your writing in the future.
DDude
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Wow. What a well written story. Usually I'm not into the long fiction, but this was pretty decent. I'm only knocking you on technicality because I think the 'scale' jumped around a bit, which someone else already mentioned.
Otherwise, looking forward to more from you.
Foobar
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
joeschmoe
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
The BE was very lacking. F cups on a 7 foot female are by no means enormous. Other than that this story was original and had me gripped throughout. Very well done, all the elements I like to see, hope to see more soon and I hope you reimagine how you depict BE. Thanks for the quality story! We needed one!
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I really liked this story, as it hit a lot of the things that really get me going: breast expansion, perfection of both male and female forms, etc.
Execution was somewhat lacking; I would call this an A+ idea with B+ execution.
If I was going to quibble, it would be to have more emotional description of how the characters felt as their bodies became godlike. Also, the drug company seemed weak. Perhaps a CDC warning that alerted the doctor --- trying to keep a lid on the disease because different people were affected badly --- perhaps becoming sex craving maniacs or death or whatnot. And the doctor, instead of turning them in, infects himself and his three nurses, then "treats" them all to a retreat up in the mountains.
Lots of possibilities in this world.
Happy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent work!!
Great descriptions.
Can't wait to see more.
The Almighty Popo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very enjoyable! I can't give it 100%, but I think I still give it a 97%.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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