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Eggs
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The Tale of Our Mountain
Still another Sequel to "The Tale of Our Isle," continuing the story of "Grandma Annie's Sea Journal" and "The Story of Our Homecoming." Bill and Annie establish their secluded homestead in the "Stoney Mountains" where they reestablish their melon crop. (Extremely long) Illustrated with drawings from Grandpa Bill's long-lost sketchbook. Thank you to everyone for your nice words and support of this series.  Sorry for the long wait.  
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Xero
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I wish some one would find a melon like that...just so I can eat it!

Arhus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Thank you for continuing this wonderful series!

madmacs2010
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Oh man! Eggs, after reading your last tale I thought that was it for Annie and Bill as they rode off into the sunset and then you turn out this prize winning melon! I'm serious about the prize winning too, do you write outside of the erotic because you have talent, this saga as it has become is so enthralling, the language and the depth of the story is wonderful, had this not have had anything to do with eroticism or BE I'm sure I would have enjoyed it just as well. Keep up the wonderful work a true example of erotic fiction from a master craftsman.

Anonymoose
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent installment to your series. Love to see stories of the rest of the clan and WIlliam and Arianna adventures in the 20th and 21st centuries.

chefjet
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

another epic tale. I can't wait to hear more about not only william and arianna, but also about the rest of the clan.

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