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The Overflowing Bra

Volt Namazuros
Hippity Hoppity, Easter's on its way~
Maybe Kate shouldn't have egged on an odd-looking she may be in for a harey situation...
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Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

A nice original idea, keep up the good work.

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