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The Overflowing Bra

The Keeper part 6
The next part of my Keeper story (finally!!)  Sorry no growth in this one.
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Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

OH MY GOD, I've been waiting five years for this chapter to be released. I had honestly given up hope after 2 years but here it is suddenly.

I honestly always like this story, even without the breast expansion and stuff it would have been a great read. This latest chapter for example lacks any direct for of BE but with your writing skills you paint a perfect picture of Sharon that is really enjoyable.

I will always look forward to a new chapter but for the next one, could you keep the wait at least under two years?

Ninja In The Night
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

While I have read your other Keeper files perfectly, I am unable to read this one. Please resubmit it in .TXT, .HTML, or .RTF format. Word Processing Service or .WPS is unable to be read by certain computers. Namely mine, but still....

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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