The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Plato Voltaire
Harsh Fuzz
Oklahoma City, 1974. Crime is going up as fast as the heat, and it'll take cops with the biggest guns to bring justice to the street!

See Officers Karen 'Sugar' Wilcox and Lisa 'Cinnamon' Parlor bring their awesome arsenals into play to prevent a crime king from performing an outrage on the city! No odds are too long, no restraint too tight to keep these lethal ladies from busting out and cracking the heads of criminal scum! Action! Suspense! Passion! Righteousness never came in a pair of packages more finer! See Harsh Fuzz! Rated R.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

As a normal story or as a BE story, this was an enjoyable read. It played out like a movie. Like a 70's B-movie. It was great! My only problem was that there were some distracting grammatical and spelling errors. Great work overall. Keep it up!

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