sonicer2@lycos.com
Same story just with Microsoft word previous versions instead of the new version... I'm so tech savy huh?
A simple Story based on a picture said picture is with the story give a read and a review let me know if I did something right or not... E-mail is sonicer2@lycos.com or sonicer2@hotmail.com Either or now the Summary is this... Dr. Frink, local mad scientist tests a new growth drug he calls the Arousa Growth. It's a pill that grows a persons breasts and cocks grow bigger depending on how aroused they get. And who does he test it on but one Bart Simpson? What will Bart do with knowledge of this growth drug?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.67
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 3.00
Marc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
me
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Russian Judge
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
If you're going to write a Simpsons parody, even a porn one, it would help if you'd even seen a single episode of the series. Aside from the names, there's nothing in this that seems anything like The Simpsons - not the dialog, not the characters, not anything. Why bother making Bart a teenager, unless you have some moral problem with a little kid suddenly getting horny and interested in sex? You got a 3 in BE description simply because of the girls actually enjoying sex and getting pregnant, the only interesting facet of the story.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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