Julie's eagerness to have a baby leads her to an untested fertility drug and changes to her and her husband Rick that no one could have imagined. (Added email address for feedback)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 1.00
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Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
Not bad, but fatally flawed. Please stick to first, second or third person instead of switching between them every other sentence...
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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