A story about a guy college student and a shy below average girl who discover a mystical CD from a powerful mage. The CD grants the ability to bring BE stories to life. See how this unlikely team accidentally unleashes the magic to create some fun times.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 4.00
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
A pretty good story. It could use a little polish, there were parts where it seemed to be missing a comma or had some other minor errors. There were some small breast size issues; F cup is not the same size as a soccer ball and F cup +1 is G, not H. I look forward to the next chapter!
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