A story about a guy college student and a shy below average girl who discover a mystical CD from a powerful mage. The CD grants the ability to bring BE stories to life. See how this unlikely team accidentally unleashes the magic to create some fun times.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.60
- BE: 3.40
- Characters: 3.40
- Technical: 3.80
flies
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Loved it. Great story idea, loved the climactic scene there, great fun.
A+
The Almighty Popo
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Kiri
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Erazor
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
liked the story
maybe u could use some of the other stories from overflowing bra (like e.g. Master PC or what ever you like) and let Brian put those stories into his stories he is writing maybe he wants to modify some of the original stories?
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Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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