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Teenage girl becomes apprentice to an air mage.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Chaos-Master
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
8/20/2010 I like how you worked B.E. without doing anything even semi-sexul, unlike some authors. I know it probably won't happen but, Please keep writing stories like this!! The somewhat odd story is refreshing in it's unique way instead of being so similar to other stories. Once again, GREAT STORY
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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