What happens when a worldwide multi-billion dollar electronics consumer company gets in on the bra industry?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.57
- BE: 4.43
- Characters: 4.43
- Technical: 4.86
Sinnie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
great short story, I really like your IBra concept!
Pyro9975
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Really good short story. I noticed you swapped iPad and iPhone once in there (page four, I believe). Overall, well done.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Sobtac you're great, looking forward to more as usual
Arhus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great read, wish it was longer
MadMacs2010
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awww, you stopped too soon, I was looking forward to finding out just how big massive was. Perhaps if you consider making further episodes, just like the iPhone perhaps she find other iBra compatible apps that were written by the public domain. There's all sorts of adventures that could be had...
Very good tale that has been well written and has a lot of potential for ...uh... expansion.
Red
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great little story, look forward to more! nice plot, funny premise
deus
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Good start. It would be nice if you gave some indication of how big her breasts were at various times. I can't wait for the next part!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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