A story about Abigail, who had puberty pass her by. That is until a fairy gives her what she wants... and something her brother didn't intend to want.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.18
- Characters: 3.65
- Technical: 3.88
Eddie
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Absolutely wonderful. The spellchecker guy needs his head examined. Keep em coming.
Voodoo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
tgfan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved the story, we need part II!
Kelvin
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Use a spell checker you fucking moron
Tdean
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I loved the story!! Just a few spelling and grammar errors. NOT nearly as bad as some make out. PLEASE keep up the good work. :)
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
How freaking hard is it to use a spell checker?
Hell-Scythe
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I enjoyed this story a lot.
Gothic_Sissy
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Loved The Story. Can't wait to read what you got lined up next.
brian
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Excellent story. I hope you continue to develop your characters. Personally Id like to see someone get pregnant from all the unprotected sex but Im a little biased in that. Please continue writing this series!
wundenkopf
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
great little bit of erotic fiction there. Love the concise characters and vivid action.
What it lacked in overall detail and BE, it made up for in overall likeability, brevity and fappability! :--D
TenTen
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
The idea is good; the plot is fun to read. There are a few holes, though (like What will happen with Alex? Will her parents accept the new daughter? What about bureaucracy?)
But those hardly matter for an erotic short story with boobie fairies. :p
Russian Judge
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Liked the story idea. I would have liked more BE in the story; perhaps having the magic spill over to the others in the story. Which wouldn't be a bad idea for a sequel; a teenage team operating like the Healing Hooters stories.
Dwom
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I love the story! I'd like to see some more BE of course, but overall I think it was well written and fun. I hope to see more!
houdini50
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
needs a little more detail-great idea but too simple-when i read something i want to be able to see it in my minds eye
Daiyuki
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
The best part of it was the organization, sentence structure, etc. Otherwise.. yeesh. Not much there.
anderson
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
i enjoyed the story and am hoping for a part 2. More description of the BE wouldn't hurt
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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