The Overflowing Bra

Good story. Nice pace.

wonderful story, please write a follow up. your characters are great, and the possiblities are just endless

POS: Happy romance / individuals who care for one another
          Family of hermaphrodites 
          Lots of cum
NEG: On the 1st page it is hard to follow who is who aka who is the shorter one and who is not.  
          Anyways you could have put that first scene somewhere in the middle of the story rather than beginning with it and your story would not suffer from having a slower opening.  
          It is a little difficult to tell who is speaking at any one time in the story.  But this is not a critical hang up.
         Regardless of any of this criticism, I would like to read more.  
         
         P.S. Could you please include some of the hermaphrodite's masturbation sequences?  
 

At first I thought the grammar might be off when I saw 'want' instead of 'what' in the fourth sentence, but the story turned out to be fairly well-written after that. Maybe it's just my level of reading comprehension, but I found it sometimes difficult to figure out which person was talking or changing at a given time. In terms of content [spoiler] I was a little sad when they wasted two filled bathtubs. Also, the growth of Andi's prick from 10 inches to 12 inches is completely unaddressed.

Overall, it was a very entertaining read for those who are into the content portrayed, and I think it has plenty of space for the story to grow if the author decides to add a sequel or flesh out more details in this storyline.

Overall I love the way the story is going. Personally I prefer more descriptive narrative especially when it comes to the B.E. Also I think more description is due for how the girls look. Definitely a great read and please keep writing, very well done.