Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.50
- BE: 2.75
- Characters: 2.50
- Technical: 4.25
amberdawn
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Super hot. Don't mind the shallow characters, you said all we really need to know; everybody's Ken and Barbie like. So anyway, super hot concept, neat take on online persona. More breast expansion description is always better. Good stuff, though.
Xhuman
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Transhumanism is not about creating a totalitarian society.
Mr. Justaguy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
A fun premise and a good story. Could use a little more fleshing out (no pun intended) especially in the characters. Never really got a sense of the main character's personality.
Amononous
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
The overall story wasn't bad, but the character was really 2 dimensional and had no discernible personality. the process also was very quick and had not much in the way of description other than DD cup->f cup.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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