A short first story I made in my free time about a young couple that experiences a whole new level of love
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.00
- BE: 1.00
- Characters: 1.00
- Technical: 1.00
Fucktard
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
At least you got the shit part right.
P.S. Learn to spell, asshole.
Munkie
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Very bad. Please pass a basic English class and try again.
Infame
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I was hoping that at the bottom it was going to say 'sent from my iPhone'
OmniTrixie
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Makes you wonder what kind of keyboard was used. P and T generally aren't that close together.
Anonymous
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Slack
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I am wondering if the typo in the title is more of a Freudian slip...
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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