A single moment in time, featuring two lesbians who experience an unexplained breast and butt expansion. These are written as a writing exercise and as such are not supposed to have much in the way of plot or character detail. Please rate and critique accordingly.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.25
- Characters: 3.25
- Technical: 4.50
francis
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Hard to rate something when the preamble asks you to rate it accordingly... "I didn't put much time into this so rate accordingly." Kind of strange. Anyway, I liked it.
Slack
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very good for what it is.
B.E.N.
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Well written BE scene, could've done with a little more detail.
what
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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