All Jeanine wants is a man to pay attention to her.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.63
- BE: 3.88
- Characters: 3.63
- Technical: 4.00
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Your grammar and pacing need work, but the story was enjoyable.
Tdean
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Uhh wow. Loved the story. Loved the tfs, wish it would have kelp going till she got got back to school where she was affected by bunches of guys at once.
The story and the changes were lil too quick. The background was just a quick glance over.
Kusko
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Excellent Story with a good background Story but lacks length. It´s more like a sketch than a Story but otherwise good.
juggernaut
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very good! I'll be looking for more on this one.
Beth G
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I loved this story, though I also wish that there was more attention paid to developments as it felt very quickly ended. I'll look forward to more from you!
Fred Garvin
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Liked the story, but it ended too soon. More emphasis on her lactation would have been nice.
Dan Standing
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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