In this second chapter Rob explores his ability to make breasts grow. He meets a new hot girl in town and decides to test out his magic. Will his girlfriend get jealous? Let's find out.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 5.00
Jason G
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Well written, but this chapter was rather short compared to the previous one. But I'm still looking forward to the next one! Perhaps they can discover that they can modify more than just breasts?
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