The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Sofia for Double H
Unknown
Birthday Boy
Brief, but telling. Romance, breast implants and augmentation
Average Scores:
 Jasemin
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4 
It's like you're on a miisson to save me time and money!
 mystery
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
can you please change the file to a word document
 anon
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3 
I don't know what you tried to do, but that's an empty file.
 Blargh
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
This file cannot be uncompressed.
 technical
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1 
This file does not work.
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