The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Perfect Bodies
‘Every woman deserves a body that can be worshipped.’
Happy Christmas Oveflowing Bra.
Average Scores:

Above Ground Pools
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

As usual, the webmaster posted correctly..!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

A short and enjoyable read. I loved the artwork.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Short, sweet, well written... More of a taster than a full story. Will there be more?

Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

too short, not too descriptive.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I agree with the other comments; this is a great start, will there be more? :)

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

is there going to be more? i enjoyed the introduction, but NEED some closure lol

Love it
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Nice story, give us more!

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

A perfect BE nugget! Thanks for sharing and for the bit o belly, much appreciated!

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Nice short holiday read that got me in the mood. The pictures added some more description to the story where the writing may have been lacking. Thanks for sharing.

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Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
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