‘Every woman deserves a body that can be worshipped.’
Happy Christmas Oveflowing Bra.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.11
- BE: 3.78
- Characters: 3.44
- Technical: 4.11
Above Ground Pools
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
As usual, the webmaster posted correctly..!
Meta
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
A short and enjoyable read. I loved the artwork.
Tremall
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Short, sweet, well written... More of a taster than a full story. Will there be more?
tstar
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
too short, not too descriptive.
deus
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I agree with the other comments; this is a great start, will there be more? :)
kellen
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
is there going to be more? i enjoyed the introduction, but NEED some closure lol
Love it
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Nice story, give us more!
G-man001
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
A perfect BE nugget! Thanks for sharing and for the bit o belly, much appreciated!
Glenn
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Nice short holiday read that got me in the mood. The pictures added some more description to the story where the writing may have been lacking. Thanks for sharing.
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