The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Plato Voltaire
desslok@cox.net
Forced Proportion
In this sequel to Forced Perspective our villain Gus has escaped from prison. What sort of havoc does he plan for Madison and her friends, not to mention the rest of Outback? Read to find out!
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 DanDannyDo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I like this. who ever does not should just not read it.
 rawr
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I like it, I love it, I want some more of it. Close minded trolls should shut up.
 Some Dude
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I loved it. I can't wait for more.
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