When a man unknowingly saves the life of a fairy she vows to pay him back. Overhearing him wish his love doll was alive, the fairy secretly grants his desire. But the newly alive love doll has other plans for herself, and what she will need to get ahead in the world... 14 pages long and features four illustrations done by Dan Standing. PDF format ebook.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.17
- BE: 3.67
- Characters: 3.83
- Technical: 4.33
Tdean
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
i thought it was a pretty good story myself. She thought she was free till she got greedy. Nice twist at the end.
eekee
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
When I started reading I thought I wasn't going to like this because I didn't like Eddie, but all the stuff between Mavi and Darla was a lot of fun. :)
xxxecil
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Nice twist, not the best art I've seen, and a little more graphic sex would have been better.
Mak
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
I wasn't too thrilled about this one, Didn't really care for the characters or process. also theres something surprisingly unerotic about a fat slob's closet filled with bowling balls and a worn out sex doll.
Pillager
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Nice change of pace.
Great art!
Catfish
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another excellent Dan Standing "wishes gone wrong" story.
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