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A quick story I wrote trying to get the story in under 1000 words. When Janey sets out for her first night of prostitution, her john changes not just her outlook but her life. My second attempt to upload this.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.71
- BE: 3.43
- Characters: 3.86
- Technical: 4.71
PowerFisto!
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Details could have been a bit more descriptive but the idea was solid and very, very fun!
xxxecil
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Short and to the point, but it could have used a more thorough description of the changes.
Solo89
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This was awesome, can't wait to read the sequel!
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Wow, this was great. Short but sweet.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very good, I can't wait to see what you could do with more length!
BEman
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
An excellent story considering its restrictions. Hope to see more, but preferably more story and description behind it.
DexterSinister
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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