As Gina slowly adjusts to life as a large breasted woman she makes a horrific discovery about her condition. (Folder contains PDF files. If you dont like it dont download.)
Troll much?
Not evrything here is perfect, but there's no way this is a 1.Hope this is just tease and we get PROPER growth next time
Despite the controversy this is fantastic. MORE!
Actually I quite liked it. Really looking forward to more...
For the PDF haters: shut the fuck up. You act like spoiled children.
LOL! Okay, but how we're supposed to know if we like it, if we don't donwload it ?...
So we're supposed to know if we like it, BEFORE we download it, so BEFORE we read it ?.... Sorry, if it's not what you try to say (if not, you just sucks to made yourself understandable), in other case, you dumb lol! xD
Story was great! Keep it up. As for the file format debate: PDF reader is free. If it's the format that works for you, stick with it. I agree that if others don't like that, they don't need to read it.
Aye—what's the point of whinging about the file format? It's a better written story than most we got on here, so who cares if it's not html?
You can't set us up by saying "if you don't like X don't download it". If that's the jerky attitude your going to have then don't post your story. EVERYONE else posts in formats that everyone can read, most people do several formats, stop being lazy. Just because you have a hardon for PDF doesn't mean everyone else does, and we don't.
Didn't download because PDF files are terrible, slow and a bother to read. I could get something more interesting to read that wasn't a pain to deal with by someone who wasn't a total cunt. I wouldn't have given the story all ones had your description not been full of attitude for absolutely no reason. So, way to go on being a prick I guess. I'm sure people who would have loved to enjoy your story are broken hearted they couldn't read your shoddy PDF files.
me too. Booo Zemm!
Counter-acting Zemms negative review with all 5's. :)
I love your style. Keep at it! Looking forward to a part 4.
I would agree with the first reviewer. You have had many people ask for a different format, is there any reason to not release it in RTF as well as PDF? I for one would love to read your story, but find myself not able to. I am legally blind and I have screan readers that, for some reason, don't work well with PDF files...and to put a rude comment like "If you don't like PDF, don't download" its almost an insult to your readers. I am not trying to be a jerk in return...I am just hoping you would reconsider putting your stories in a format that I can read. I am putting all threes so not to be an ass, and I would love to give an honest review when I can read them.
Excellent! The criticism of style is silly; this is how Sobtac chose to tell the story, and it's a good way to do it. Not everything has to be written in completely standard format; the creativity of this writing make sit interesting, and it's not hard to follow at all. Very good, very well written, excellent emphasis on how heavy and pendulous her tits are and how cumbersome (but delightful) her new size and bulk are. And a very nice plot turn! Can't wait for the next installments, and Gina ballooning to positively monstrous bulk!
I don't like the pdf either, but so what? I'm not going to miss a great story because the format is modestly annoying. Thanks, Sobtac!
Honestly, the PDF format turns me off, it is annoying attempting to scroll through. You can't do several things you can while in RTF or even on a web page.
That being said I've read the others and honestly all together decent work, but it needs improvement. As other reviewers stated there are gaps. At times I just couldn't get into it.
If you do continue writing spend more time, details are good, descriptions are good, but flow is needed to keep people to read more. No I don't expect the next Shakespeare here, but honestly I'd like to see the stories worked on a bit more. Fleshed out if you know what I mean.
Best of luck.
I like this series, but it feels like there are big chunks of story missing. Not sure if that was intentional or not but it would be nice to see a "6 months later" or something every now and then just to help readers understand what's happening.
Zemm: The reason I wrote that in the description was in my last addition someone was being a 'jerk' in the reviews who just moaned about the story being PDF format. I wrote that to try and dissuade that from happening again. Looks like it really worked.
Very well written! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, especially after where you left off.
Enjoying this series so far and looking forward to more!
Well apparently I didn't like it, so I didn't download it. (If you're going to be a jerk in the description, you're gonna get people being a jerk in the reviews.)