What happens when Tia Halibel and the Hogyoku's power to make desires a reality mix?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 3.00
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 2
The best advice I can give you is read your stories carefully after you finish writing them. There are a lot of spelling and grammar errors in there that could easily have been weeded out if you had. That aside it was actually a really enjoyable read, and I hope to read more from you.
Fahzbehn
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
A nice quick little romp and retelling of the classic wishing stone gone awry story. Those unfamiliar with Bleach past the dubbed episodes may well find themselves lost and trying to figure out who and what is being talked about. I got a little lost during the growth portions as to the amount of growth, but, by the end, it was a little more evident. Some minor misspellings but, aside from that, not a bad story.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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