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A young woman participates in a controversial medical study promising a cure for breast cancer and gets more than she bargained for.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.43
- Characters: 4.57
- Technical: 4.86
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story in my opinion. I can't think of anything else to say! Except great job, keep it up!
Eggs
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very realistic depictions, especially Sarah's typically-female attitude. It'll be interesting to see where this goes in the next part. Hope she "snaps out of it" mentally, for the sake of the love story angle.
Coffee Pilot
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Excellent job. Nice well drawn out slow BE. I especially like how it started out with the nipples; very good lead in to the full BE proper. Could have used a little more exposition on the growth for the weeks between D cup and G cup, but good job keeping the story's pace moving. I also have really enjoyed your previous work and am glad to see you continuing to write.
Kowlaski
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
COMING SOON: Ounce of Prevention Part II: 'A Pound of Cure'
Red
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It just doesn't get any better than this. Would dearly love another chapter, and see Sarah expand to enormous size. Thanks for a really great story, and beautifully written.
chase
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
One of the absolute best authors on the site.
deus
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
The BE is mostly at the end of the story, but I enjoyed it overall. I will definitely be checking out your other stories! Thanks for writing!
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