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Once she started lactating, she gave more and more milk - and her breasts just kept on growing. (Hardcore sex scenes included.)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.83
- BE: 4.33
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.67
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I have to say, that although this story didn't focus too much on BE, or on character, it was really fucking good at the lovemaking description. Best sex I've ever read. Keep it up, but add in a bit more of the BE description, imo.
rentahero
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
The original was always on of my favorite stories. I eagerly await the third installment.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
That was worth the wait, I just hope that I won't have to wait as long for part 3!
faggot farting
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Wow dude, writing a sequel to a story you wrote more than a decade ago, that takes dedication.
Not perfect, but great. You're probably a couple stories away from a masterpiece.
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Interesting. Got me going. You need to write more. I can't wait for Ch 3!
oy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome! Cliff hanger, excited for part 3!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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