The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Green Around the Gills
College roommates Abby and Tasha are returning home after a vacation trip, when they suddenly experience some changes!  At a loss to explain what's happening to their bodies, the two eventually just give in and enjoy it!

Expect the usual belly/breast growth from me... but only on Tasha!  Abby's changes are a little more exotic... she's becoming a mermaid!  And her boobs get bigger too, of course.
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Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Delightfully weird and unexplained. More like this!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

*ahems* Please sir/madam, I want some more!

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Just make more.

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I enjoyed it. I hope this is just the first part of a longer story. The only suggestion I would make is to provide some benchmarks for the size change in breasts so the reader gets an idea of the rate of change and eventual size.

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