My first story. A little Halloween fun. See what happens when Halloween costumes get real.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.46
- BE: 3.92
- Characters: 4.08
- Technical: 3.92
doesn't matter
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
great story, would like to see more time and sex discovering the final changes slowly as they played with each other the next morning, But very good, would like to see more similar stories along this line
Gman
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I absolutely loved this one. My only complaint was the leangth. I really hope you do more with this idea, or more like it. Please do the community a favor and keep writing.
Jason G
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Like the others have said - good story, kinda short, but good start - you have what it takes, so keep it up!
bier
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Cmdr mark
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 2
Enjoyed this story. Like the others, I would like to see more set in this storyline/universe, either with these characters that night (more details) or on what other characters did that night.
dranon
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Really enjoyed this one. I wish you took your time more, and really went into some detail concerning their adventures. Still, nicely done.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Needs to be longer. Loved the story overall and wish there were more like it here.
drhobo
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
not bad for a first attempt
Leticia Latex
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Seems to be missing some quotation marks in certain areas and better editing of the paragraphs.
Editing aside though, it's a nice tale. Shame they managed to turn back in time ;P
Cyanide
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I love the self controlled nature and the dildo on her PLEASE write more stories like this and the length of the story could have been longer.
cfosd
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Write more stories but with clothes ripping and more expansion.
Kailia
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Not too bad save for a single quibble. Halloween is on the 31st of October, not the 13th, and a full moon on the 31st is far rarer. Aside from that, quite liked.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, loved the elements, was a little short for my taste but I great first story, keep it up!
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