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The Overflowing Bra

Sticky and Sketchy
Part 3 of the Full Moon series.  Impregnated!  Allie once loved to get all big and pregnant looking, but now that it's actually happened she's not feeling so good.  Plus, the things she's carrying in her womb aren't exactly human...

Lots of preg content, massive body expansion, and weird critters in this one.  Stay tuned for the epic conclusion as Maxxine returns!
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Ninja In The Night
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I have to admit, I found this story infatuating. You have a great background story, a sense of expansion, a good bit of character development including a character who gives into her desires and benefits from it. The transgender sets me off a bit, but not enough to say anything bad about this story. As for the expansion, the "chest" expansion happened in the first chapter. But this chapter is a perfect follow up to the second. Great job, and hope to see more writing from you. Kudos to you.

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

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