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The Overflowing Bra

Kate's Big Fat Freak Wedding
In this sequel to Full Moon, the ever-hungry Kate is getting married!  When there's a mix-up with the gift baskets at her bachelorette party, her bridesmaids are exposed to an experimental gel derived from Jen's magical cum!  It creates quite a situation, with the girls all outgrowing their dresses in various ways, and they scramble to the wedding before their expansion ruins everything.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Thought Full Moon and this sequel was pretty darn awesome. I wonder if you would be willing to post this story over at I am as much a lurker there as I am here. But your story is well written and I don't wanna post another person stuff without their permission.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

awesome end to a great 2 part story(might be a third, loved this one, big fan of the weight gain parts, all in all a well put together story with great characters and overall a easy read for enjoyment.

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