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The Overflowing Bra

JR Parz
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Nick's friend gives him a perfume potion that turns his dream girl into a busty sex slave.
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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

In a short story you have covered the necessary steps superbly! The reader is brought into the fantasy at just the right pace. It is an exciting read, keep up the good work!

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Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

very good

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