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The Overflowing Bra

Full Moon
A slim, gawky girl named Allie harbors a deep, powerful crush on her best friend... and when the moon grows full she learns there's more to her friend Jen than she thought.  She-male transformations, massive belly/breast inflation, and lactation follow in this tale of lunar goddesses, evil priestesses and true love.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It's a wild expansion story, but the main characters are honest and appealing. I would like to see them encounter other normal people, from their school days and their later life, and have them initiate other expansions and transformations, of boys as well as other girls. What would happen with a trans person? Can you write a story with that concept? 
Above Ground Pool
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Yeah, in my opinion, it is written on every fence!!...

Russian Judge
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 2

Can anybody with a Mac translate this to something the majority of computer owners can read? This would have rated higher if it were more readable.

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Great stuff, love pregnancy and this satisfied greatly, well done indeed and not as irritating or cheesy as other god/religion stories

Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

File is indeed a word document. The handy dandy apple OSX uses 4160 bytes in place of the 4 byte .doc extension to label it as so.

rename to fullmoon.doc for effect.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

please resubmit in .doc or html

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I can't find a way to open the file you've saved it as...

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