Short standalone story. Posted previously in elit at 7chan.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.67
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.67
- Technical: 4.00
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
BE and girl on girl action ALWAYS go great together! I also like the dialogue of the characters and was impressed with their unique names. Is there a sequel on the way?
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I like it when txt is used, because you can read plaintext on ANYTHING. It's easier to access than any other format.
It being easy or difficult to read depends on your own settings inside your text editor!
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I enjoyed the story very much. If I may offer my opinion:
1. Please don't use txt. Use something else, doc, rtf, anything. Its harder to read txt.
2. Personally I would have made the shamaness have apple sized breasts, and Vebria the larger breasts. That way you could have gone with more extensive BE descriptions.
BTW I also like the way the story ends. Good Job, keep it up. Can't wait for the follow up.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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