A temperamental high school girl finds herself growing and changing in unexpected ways.
not enough BE, but a very great story. one of my favs
QN3TzI Very amusing thoughts, well told, everything is in its place:D
FANTASTIC story. You should be writing novels.
one of the best stories I have ever read
Wow. Just wow. I came for the BE, and I stayed for the storyline. That was incredible.
Great Story perhaps the reason for Catlin's growth could be a little clearer
Great story, really well balanced in my opinion. the pacing is really well done and something relatively novel to this site, the characters feel like real people.
good job so far, still got 40 some odd pages to finish ;)
Godly.
Fantastic. Excellent quality all over, the characters are fully developed, the technical style flawless, and excellent descriptive paragraphs, not just the smut, but everything. This is a story even the New Yorker would like.
I'm only about an eighth of the way through the story, but I felt that I had to share my thoughts just based on the writing style and such. It's one of the few stories (not that I can remember the names of the others) on this site that has actually captured my interest outside of the sexual aspect. It's just a fun read so far, I like the descriptions, the characters and how it flows, the dialogue especially is very natural. I think it could be improved, as all things can, but only minutely. Like, the mother doesn't seem that concerned or sympathetic after the accident for example. Maybe that's just how she's supposed to be since it's happened before, but still, some endearments or words of comfort come from any normal mom.
Again, I've read a very small portion of it, but very good story, you should definitely continue submitting them. I'll give a 5 for BE just based on my expectations and the other comments ;]
I liked it. It had solid characters an interesting story a nice use of symbolism, all in all I liked it. Thanks.
The story was excellent. I'm not entirely into the gts-scene, but as said before, the quality is too good for categories to matter. I would have liked more BE description, but whatever. I was especially taken with how all the characters came to a proper resolution.
This is an excellent story, and I can totally see this being read outside of this site.
This is amazing!
Its not really a BE story as much as it is a story about BE.
Definately share it around the web
More mini-GTS than BE, but what BE there is is quite good, and lots of ink is spilled describing those breasts. Didn't like the nearly-fourth-wall-breaking bit about GTSforum or whatever, though. Just seemed unnecessary.
I so wish this had more BE and a little less GTS! But it's too good to criticize so keep it up, THANKS!
There was more than enough BE to satisfy me. The entire story was just plain awesome. Thanks and I don't mean to sound greedy but please write more.
nice one
Excellently written story, my only complaint would be that I wish it was broken up into parts instead of one really long document, simply because it's easier to read in chunks.
Definitely a fave.
Excellent work. Great characters. Please write more!!!
One of the better stories written on this site. I'd like to see more like this one.
More of a mini-GTS story than a BE one -- but when the writing is this good, categories just about stop mattering. This has a home here. And if we're very lucky, it'll start its own neighborhood.
This is a marvelously written story. It's rare to see such well developed characters in this kind of thing - great work.
one of my favs.