The Overflowing Bra

Can't score highly because you plagiarized another persons work.

This is a straight copy from a doujin, not original whatsoever and should be deleted.

more please,and more about her growth,height and breast size.

I downloaded it and opened it, giving you the benefit of the doubt. I then searched for titty monster and closed it upon finding it.

Decent.
Avoid author inserts, they're sophomoric and immature. The incest was somewhat unmotivated, obviously just transplanted from the manga this is loosely based on. It would have worked just as well -- perhaps better -- if she'd sexually humiliated her brother (but not actually had sex with him) and then gone out and seduced one of those classmates she was complaining about earlier on in the story.

If your going to copy someones Manga at least change things. Mega Milk? Thats the phrase from her shirt, and same exact setup with the brother and sister. You have decent writing skills, but you should write your own story and not base it on someone elses work without crediting them. For shame! Shiden Akira is saddened by this story.

This is one of the best stories i have read here!

Really?  more like a copy of "Tiny Boobs Giant Tits History" by Shiden Akira.  It may not be an exact copy, but at least try to be a little more original.

Good story, would love to see more.

Pretty straightforward stuff, I'm generally a fan of slower expansion processes but that's simply a preference. I think all could agree that some more description in the growth would be much appreciated. The characters didn't much exist but that's par for the course for most of this stuff and it worked fine. Technically the grammar was fine, which is definitely something that is often lacking in erotic stories and, thus, is much appreciated.
Keep it up and you will certainly get better. Also, I much appreciated the "Titty Monster" reference, I was hoping that it was a purposeful reference in the title.

Pretty much agree with Ninja. I quite like the descriptions of growth but not keen on the incest.

The story was a decent beginning to an eventual sequel though it lacked some of the basic forms of writing, especially when writing expansion stories. Though the girl's desire to grow bigger was made abundant throughout the story, the sudden choice of brotherly love was quite unclear to me for someone who was so angry so shortly ago. I think you could of written that portion a bit better, truthfully. The rest of it was for the most part non-descriptive as far as what can be found on the rest of the archive from single story authors. You did a decent beginning, as any writer would and hope you go more into the story of D.T. and his girlfriend in the next chapter.
On that note, usually the idea of brotherly love doesn't interest me. Only a few stories have ever sat alright with me and that's usually clones. Though that is a personal opinion and not a fact for most people in this archive. 
Once again, great start, and hope that your next story comes out even better.