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A dominated woman experiences BE and gives her husband what he always wanted. Short story that is all about the sex. Please comment!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.50
- BE: 2.75
- Characters: 2.50
- Technical: 3.25
bear chives
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
there was an interesting mix of power dynamics between the husband and wife. Clearly she wanted to please him, had been made to feel worthless for her inability to do so, and then she can give him what they both want.
it was a little insane but that's totally cool with me. B+
blargh
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Yossarian
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
I found this a bit disturbing. I was impressed at the beginning with how thoroughly broken you made the main character, but then to turn around and reward her monstrous husband, rather than punish him, was, well, let's say disappointing to say the least. Let her find vengeance through BE—don't just rob her of the last bit of identity she had left.
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This story rates all 4s from me. What would have made me give it 5s?
I would have liked to hear about growing breasts.
Also the puke all over her. It doesn't exactly make me hard, yeah know?
Keep it up though, it was worth the read. I especially like the length of the story. Too long gets old unless theres more to the story then just the sex.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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