Part 4 of 4, "Revenge blown out of proportion" - Chapters 11 to 14: It’s the evening of Halloween, and Connie’s BFF Marge neither forgot nor forgave their object of shared detestation, Pearl, for hooking up with Marge’s ex-boyfriend Danny. Bent on revenge, Marge uses her temp job at the Diner to lace the happy couple’s drinks with the last of Connie’s berry juice and goads Connie into something they’ll come to regret. As transformations get out of control, Connie must face a decision that will change some lives forever ...
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.88
- BE: 4.63
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.88
intangir
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
As full of fantastically sexy situations as usual! I love it when things go out of control for your characters, and love how you've been building on the backstory of your world.
And I'm a big fan of chapter 12 and Pearl's incredible growing oyster. I wish there was a site covering transformations of that nature.
Mjagame
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great stuff, keep writing!
Basically the perfect mix of what I like in erotic fiction: mostly being about fetish and sex, but with everything connected via story and character development.
Blamandude
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Pretty good end to an awesome story. I must admit I liked the previous parts better because of the breast obsessed Marge.
Bahamad
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Very minor technical things which definitely did not detract from the actual telling of the story. Nicely paced, though I almost feel a bit blue below the waist with the interruption by OAO.
Eager for future installments, fresh characters and the same excellent work.
MistaRhee
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Hoo-boy, what a trip that was!
I was quite pleased with the entire content of this story and how it progressed. Not too long a focus on any one particular part and a descriptive quality that placed me into the closest virtual presence, although an unsensed one, I have ever felt while reading a story. It did wonders for my imagination!
hargle
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
hooooly crap, this was amazing. Just, completely amazing. Seeing this wonderful body of lore around Altaerna take form is incredible, the closest I've seen to this was Feaophobia and Dr. Hooters, and those were just random stories with the same characters, in the same area of time. The sheer ambition of this world you're creating is amazing, and I absolutely cannot wait for your next work.
I BOW to you, good sir.
Hammertime
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Some of the best work on the site. Id love to see this story continue, i feel like this is a prelude and you should continue on with the same main character, I would like to see more giantess stuff, but thats just a personal request. More please!
elvis
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You do good work. You always do.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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