The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

High Priest of Dagon
The Tithe of the Tribe
This is a quick story for you guys, concerning the fate of a shipwrecked sailor. Enjoy!
Average Scores:
 Josey14
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1 
The grammar was awful, and the story was rather nonexistent.
 Reader
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 2 
It was not good.
 pillager
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Short & very sweet!
Your BE descriptions are getting better. 
 joce37
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
Short but enjoyable.   I have always liked the idea of breast milk triggering TG.  
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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