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The Overflowing Bra

naughtychaswick
naughtychaswick@gmail.com
The Expanding MicroBe Collection, 1st Edition
Collection of be microfiction authored by yours truly.
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PeterBE
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Really nicely done. A lot of fun. Thanks!

Baconman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I adored this. Methinks I've found the missus' bedtime stories for the next week :3

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